Odion
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This is sadly going to be bare-bones until monday.
All of my works are built to work as both books and games.
Title- Zero Point
Plot- Coming Soon
Characters
Genisis- Coming Soon
Dupree- Coming Soon
Simon Bruzz- Coming Soon
Ragnarok- Coming Soon
Rapture- Coming Soon
The Breaths of an Untold Destiny 1
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Characters
Kale Morganrite- The main character of the story, Kale holds the Guardian Gabriel and leads the Carriers on their quest throughout the story. Kale is very much a personally weak person when it comes to himself, it is only because he is compelled to help others and those that he cares about that he is able to will himself into the journey of the story.
He is very much a character that develops positively by the old saying no pain no gain, or in his case his negatives only strengthen him in the long run of becoming a better person
Kale lived a very quite life in his village, his parents died when he was still young, so the few friends he made became extremely important to him. He was never very popular in the village and hence he only assumed that was his fault. Deciding that something was wrong with him and that he was naturally not someone people were compelled to be around. This turned him into very reclusive person. In his later teen years he took to heart the idea of a romantic noble, someone who would do what was good or just because they were bound by their very existence to do it. It was this kind of ideology that led him to the belief that he must do what he can to solve the worlds problems. It was also this that made being chosen to be the bearer of Gabriel so much harder, because literally the weight of the world was placed on his back. As more and more responsibility is placed on his shoulders, and the tragic events of people close to him dieing, his shell shatters forcing him deep into depression.
Kale himself acts very much like an accommodating person who doesn’t hold himself to highly. He tries to compromise in every situation and hold very few leadership qualities at the start. However as time goes on he naturally becomes more of a leader because he forced in situations where the only way to protect those closest to him is to take charge. Kale however does have a violent side that is rarely seen because he tries to avoid unneeded conflict. But on occasion in situations where his friends are threatened or insulted him can become uncontrollably angry lashing out with a furiousness almost never seen by him.
High Emperor Hyral Furioes- The Main villain of our story, the Emperor is known as the sun child because his rule has been the greatest in Middengale history. He leads his people through the rise of Wraiths but he holds a very dark secret. Hyrul has a split and majority personality who sees humanity as a fat cat on the evolution ladder just waiting to be knocked off. His actions are destructive and massive on a genocidal level. But this plot twist is not known till late in the first act.
High Emperor Hyral Furioes when he is the kindly ruler of the Sun Empire he is a kindly father like figure who takes a liking to Kale and tries to guide him to do the right thing. His people know him as a fearless leader who led the armies against the wraiths the first time they emerged, and gave up an ancient family heirloom, which held old magical properties to stave off a plague that was sweeping through his lands. When the Wraiths attack again he is personally affected by the suffering his people have to go through. It is described in the story by a scribe that Emperor Hyral is a king who cries with his people, who bleeds with his people and stands with his people. However the darker personality is a cold calculated person who sees no boundaries. His actions are brutal and unrelenting, and he sees people as numbers then lives. His reason for living is as he says it, to “Push Humanity to the brink of destruction so you will be forced back from the brink of extinction.” He finds that the only way to truly describe him is that he is the sins of the world given form.
Hyral (Bad)
Has no real connection to anyone nor does he understand them
Sees everyone else as a lower and hence unimportant person in compassion to him.
Loves to speak using old quotes or poetry
Very Cold
Hyral’s good personality is very much a man who will hug you for doing something great, laugh with you, and naturally people flock to him because he is so welcoming and kind to people. He finds that he is the happiest when he is able to create poetry or tell one of his works to people. Combined with his natural charisma he has the ability to instill absolute loyalty, or bravery merely from speaking. He takes it as his personal mission to make sure that the people around him are happy, and often walks the streets the capitol city meeting and talking with people.
The Dark is very much a puppet master, even his personally groomed circle of followers speak or even see him. He controls his forces from a far and treats everything as expendable. He will kill without thinking and justifies his actions to the few who speak to him by reciting old works. He looks upon others with as much respect as a dog, and treats them accordingly.
Erica Rinyhart - Erica is part of a noble family who has been the carrier of Trinity for almost 1000 years. When Erica is picked she feels the pressure from the rest of the family to hold the great title to her ancestors. However this over zealous pride and no it all attitude are stripped away as her relationship with Kale blossoms. She becomes a champion of the people instead of her family.
Cestella Fugetive- Cestella is part of one of the last Drogen clans left in the entire world. After massive internal conflict, which turned their once proud coastal city states into nothing more then slums, a very barbaric society formed, women are seen as nothing more then a bearer of children or cheap labor. When Cestella is given the Guardian Gia, the people in her clan see her as an abomination and try to cleanse her soul by destroying her body. However the guardian of Gia protects her and she finds herself badly injured in a village hundreds of miles away. When she meets the other Guardians she is naturally fearful and reserved it is only though acts of kindness and sacrifice that she begins to trust again.
Xavier Dellarson- One of the few survivors of the fall of the east, Xavier has spent the last few decades searching for a way to reverse the mutation, which destroyed his family and home. He lacks and diplomatic flare and has a cerebral personality. He tries throughout the story to push his research forward and it is only after he figures out that even the Ice tear has no effect that he begins to see that to save his family he must save himself and protect those that his destiny has pushed upon him. (well done)
Ryan- Ryan is covered in mystery as he was found wondering a field naked, he was taken to a near by Monastery to be treated. However as he remembers he blacked out upon arrival and when he awoke again the temple was destroyed and the monks killed. He is always haunted by voices in his head and figures out that he is the bearer of Larsostraxa, and it is later reveled that he was chosen to bear He of the Order when he was born but was killed only moments after birth, however the essence of Larsostraxa allowed Ryan this chance at life, and became a personality in his head.
Drog- Drog comes from a village of warriors who have become famous for being the birthplace of many of Midagrath most famous hero’s. When Drog becomes the Guardian of Mallganon, his family and village are overjoyed that another one of them will join the ranks of the hero’s of history. He begins with blind faith and a stone personality but grows and shows that he is actually a gentle giant. Drog becomes like a father to Kale as they journey together.
Mark- Mark is one of the youngest men to ever be allowed to attend the Sire Military academy. However while Mark is a kind-hearted person, his devotion to his duties and his skill with a blade makes him one of the best rookies.
Grand Admiral Adamest- The current leader of the Midagrath army, he is known as a masterful traction and a hero of the people. Most see Adama as a greater hero then even the emperor as he was the one who was able to hold back the tide during the first war and pushed them far enough through the canyon that heavens gate could be constructed. At the present time he is considering retirement however major political leaders are pushing him to stay as there has yet to be a candidate who could take over the role better then himself.
High Emperor Hyral Furioes- Know to most as father king, his kind domineer and warm heart has allowed him to stay popular with the people for the last 50 years. However now as ages begin to take hold, he is becoming overtly stressed by new attacks by the Wraiths. What is revealed is that Hyrul was the one who created the Wraiths by using a purification technique that he found that was being use by a cult. By using this spell he turns the people into the greatest beasts.
Aderia- The fictional world which our story takes place in, the name originated from a dead language from the age of Sun and Moon, when humanity sat at the right of the creators as their children. Aderia means place of joy
Aderia has a very mixed climate, most of the population can be found on the most northern tip of the main land mass. This section of the continent is a mixture of tropics, Savannahs, forests. The tip is also broken up into three different sections by rows of mountains. Each section of the tip has become a different Empire. North of the main landmass is a massive sea, one which suffers from extreme weather condition which has made exploration up to the time of the story impossible. However at the northern pole is a more habitat chain of islands, which are used by the nomadic people as their place of living, using magic to help sustain themselves in the cold environment. However south of the major tip, lies an ever-expansive desert, one thought completely devoid of significant life.
Middagast- found in the central region, is the oldest and most powerful of the three Empires, its capitol city of Rios is made almost completely of marble and stand upon 3 over arching plateaus. The central environment for the are country is extremely Savannah like because of the mountain formations on either side of its boarders. However closer to the mountainsides and far north near the ocean the environment becomes very much more hospital, and is far more like grassland and small forestry.
Esengard- once known as the meca of for anyone touched with the ability of magic, Esengard was once a rich and powerful nation. However the government and its people became caught up in their excelled skilled in magic, and a culture of being superior soon developed. By most historians it was that culture shift that most likely attributed to the wraith diseases. For reasons still unknown 50 years before the story begins a virus that originated in Esengard consumed Empire, the virus turned all that were infected into wraiths, magically enhanced humans with animalistic behavior and appearance. As a result of the virus the once heavy forest, and hill land of Esengard is nothing more then a wasteland.
WarrenGale- the last of the great empires, Warrengale also known as the iron fist, is the most technologically advanced civilization, after seeing magic as a dangerous element the Barons banned the use of it in their nation, instead putting forth their efforts in technology, and utilizing the heavy amount of mountain ranges, and caves found littered throughout the region. The capital city of Galacorge is almost overwhelming to behold, as it most commonly resembles the inside of a watch or a machine, with thousands of moving parts in every building.
The Cursed Lands- The Cursed Lands make up the majority of the continent of Aderia, very little is known of this portion of the world, as its climate is extremely hostile, almost the entire region is a dessert. However the Cursed Lands were once the grounds, which the creators would give birth to all living things, or destroy those that no longer belong. The result has left the area overly saturated in magic, and most of the creatures that live within the region are older then some of the land. However at four different points in the area are sealed temple cities, no knows what they do or why their there, but the magically force they expelled is immense.
Ocren- Ocren is more of a city state then apart of the Middagast Empire, its near monopoly on anything to do with the sea has resulted in its massive growth in power and riches. Ocren is a port city and is mostly occupied by those who looking for travel or looking for work on the fleet of boats found at the harbor.
Elzen- Elzen is a small series of islands linked naturally together by massive ice flows. A small group of Nomads have created a thriving society on the islands. However just as their brothers and sisters to the south are not able to reach them by boat, the Nomads lack of boating technology past fishing boats means that no one knows that they are there. A man named Bagron Shrugor rules Elzen, he is the only one of the nomads to be able to wield magic and because of it they fear him.
Son’anamure- Son’anamure, is a secret place long forgotten by man, it is the birthplace of all life, a focuser of raw energy which can will something to life, or wipe something out of existence. No one knows what it looks like or how to find it, but it is said upon your death that a trail will lead you back to Son’anamure, so that you maybe reborn again.
Heavens Hall, The Warren Gate- both these gates were created as both protection to the nations on either side, and as a physical boundary for the other empire. Heavens Hall is the larger of the two, and consists of two main gates, manned at all times by a full regiment of soldiers. The Warren Gate is a massive steel gate, operated by a handful engineers who maintain that the door is able to open and close by itself. Most people who join the military hope to be posted at Heavens gate, as many romantic tales of heroism, float back to the surrounding villages and cities.
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